Am I good at rapping?

Not completed songs.. working on an album now. this is just shit i did along time ago and god the audio quality is horrible. Im not even sure if you will be able to hear my true voice. I pronounced all the words perfectly in all of these songs but recorded it by computer playing hte instrumental and iphone recording in my hand and just speaking into the phone. so yea i hope you can really see the depth

i dont really like mainstream shit at all, sadly im pretty addicted to the devilish shit. and the spirit is that of Capricorn. the color is grey. the planet is saturn.
I like to mix saturn with libra and scorpio
That is the sound of my voice
Kind of slutty and raspy
but god damn, for those who have familiar spirits its gonna hit ya like a ton of bricks

hope i can get some real recordings up soon
peace

Been fucking LOVING this song lately.
Man I gota do something with this rap shit
Its been calling me. Tried every other job out there. Been a sushi chef for 8 years. Hated everyday of it but I can appreciate it now and I love cooking on my own time. I am an artist. Everything I do is art. I keep my house fucking immaculate. I cant even think unless the house is clean. Everything in its place!!

And the day my wife left the house was so trashed. I left it that way and it felt perfect!! It was the atmosphere I needed to write the perfect song.
GOTA GET THIS ALBUM OUT

BUT I HIT THE WIND AND GET FADED TIL IM FACELESS

this shit is real tho. its all about the dark and light. i guess you choose what you think is light. pretty much everyone who is famous thinks lucifer is the true light. including this dude ISO. 'nevermind just got a down ass chick- might just wipe her- go and buy a crib now. i aint worried about the hoes they aint shit now. think about the past and it all makes sense now.'
welcome to the LIGHT lol

you got that right?
you wont make it to be famous if you dont sacrifice human souls yo just sayin
i think id be happy with making 100$ a night at random venues

Meet.. CRUCIFIED

any other feedback? Thanks!

I feel it was poorly written, title included. Using phrases like real talk or repping an area code doesn't help either. With that said, there were a few good lines. I would suggest telling a more detailed story, not so random with your rhymes. They need to fit within the scope of the song.

OrganiChron said:

I feel it was poorly written, title included. Using phrases like real talk or repping an area code doesn't help either. With that said, there were a few good lines. I would suggest telling a more detailed story, not so random with your rhymes. They need to fit within the scope of the song.

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Thank you for the feedback man

TJ, I write my own lyrics.. My suggestion would be to open up your vocabulary. The video was good tho I'd say, I couldn't do that. I like it tho man, nothing Id push onto others but keep it up dude.

lil Wayne sucks ass and he's famous. Make it happen. Do you have more videos?

You're only here to push your music though?

To thine own self be true..

Right on bro

tyler.durden said:

Not just unique, but very creative and highly skilled. Boy spits fire. Yes, it's comedy but also sincere and self effacing. He didn't set out to do comedy rap per se, he's just got a funny perspective so his creations are comedic. Beside the hard earned skill, go got to have integrity and be true to yourself for the shit to work...

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SonOfGod7 said:

Been fucking LOVING this song lately.
Man I gota do something with this rap shit
Its been calling me. Tried every other job out there. Been a sushi chef for 8 years. Hated everyday of it but I can appreciate it now and I love cooking on my own time. I am an artist. Everything I do is art. I keep my house fucking immaculate. I cant even think unless the house is clean. Everything in its place!!

And the day my wife left the house was so trashed. I left it that way and it felt perfect!! It was the atmosphere I needed to write the perfect song.
GOTA GET THIS ALBUM OUT

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I dont listen to this kinda spin but man, you got it. dont stop it, you got the fo sho
would love to write some music for you. pm me if interested

Revive hip-hop and stop destroying it!
This is reviving it:

Tjbenz said:

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What do you think about Kyyngg? Kant Relate song to be exact. Super good speaker and lyrical master. If i knew how to do the you tube thing id play the song for you.

a mongo frog said:

What do you think about Kyyngg? Kant Relate song to be exact. Super good speaker and lyrical master. If i knew how to do the you tube thing id play the song for you.

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fifth button from the right on the tool bar right above the text box. its the 2 film strips in between the picture thing with a mountain and the letter looking thing. insert the url into it
btw kyyngg is terrible

Rap is garbage like disco and if you define your worth via rap just kill yourself now and avoid the rush.

I only made it about 40 seconds in. It sounds real generic, the beats are monotoned, the video was bad.

I don't think you're a terrible artist, I've heard worse....I mean...chief keef?

Got any other tracks?

Karah said:

I only made it about 40 seconds in. It sounds real generic, the beats are monotoned, the video was bad.

I don't think you're a terrible artist, I've heard worse....I mean...chief keef?

Got any other tracks?

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Thanks for the feedback!

Why would you want to be? Rap is Crap.