A Ride Through The Sun & Moon

fumble

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The savage roar and carnal vibration of the iron horse
Carry us up, taking flight, to the top, of course.
In the middle of the beginning and the end, riding high,
To the top of the mountain, you and I

I encounter a sunrise to the east.
As this kindles the essence of the beast
I experience the full moon closing in on the western horizon.
A radiant symmetry of transcending beauty I've set my eyes on.

My spiritual moments in the hours caught between
The past and future are peaceful and quiet.
A mesmerizing separation of body and soul;
No other exodus will ever tie it.

This sample of heaven may never again be
An alliance shared between the sun and moon, you and me.
A once in a lifetime treasure never again will I find,
Though an eternal imprint lies forever fresh in my mind.

By merely closing my eyes I see you and me
In a place no others ever will be.
Riding the path between the moon and the sun;
I'm closing my eyes, once again the serenity has begun.
 
Wow, that was an intense poem. Did you write stoned? Either way it has some potent words in it and made me stop and really think. I wish I had a talent for words like this, I can think it in my head but when I try to verbalize it, it comes out pretty jumbled sounding. I hope you post more.
 

fumble

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Thanks Kevin. Glad you like it. Yeah I was probably stoned at the time - what's new lol. It is a true poem about a ride on a Harley at dawn.
The easiest way to start is just start writing what is in your head. Take a sheet of paper, or on the computer, and just start writing down random shit. Just fill up the page. You'll be surprised at what you end up with. I may venture into more poems, but this is the only one I have, written about 15 years ago.
 

fumble

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why thank you Grandpapy :) This is pretty much my one and only effort at poetry. I love to write though. I hope you like the bbq sauce :) Was great meeting you.
 

Dr.Amber Trichome

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simply mesmerizingly beautiful imagery fumble, so visually inspiring as I head to the Grand Canyon where the Moon will be full in the sky and I will be with my true love I feel your positive vibe.
 
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