have you erver changed who you are, and then had to go back?

I once was there, And now im gone.
I built a house, But built it wrong.

Had all my eggs, Stacked in one place.
But tripped i was, Half through the race.

Been way too nice, For way to long.
Ignored things, That ought not been done.

But i cant get mad, Not any more.
Lest i become the me, From back before.

That other me, From back in time.
Its him you see, That wrote this rhyme.

Thats him in line, About halfway down.
A smile like, Some demon clown.

The line moves, Most every day.
And soon Jake might, Be back to stay

bump

or so they say

one more bump

I hear ya man...more than you know...

i once changed my underwear... once.

and more again

and once again

Oh, what's that?
So now you say life sucks
Well, ninety-nine percent of it's
What you make of it...
So if your life sucks, you suck

-Suicidal Tendencies

well thats just the nature or nurture thing

does life suck because i suck
or do i suck becuase life sucks

brilliant poem. although my ocd finds some things in the style distracting, i like it very much in the form it was presented.

NOWitall said:

or do i suck becuase life sucks

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But why be so critical of yourself?

It's still perception.