Little Rap

yo i just started a new thread, this shit may be read, well i say it in my head, i dont wana be dead, and i am sitting in bed, whats up fred? i just fled from the cops because they found my crops, and im about to pops the pills so i start to feel, the empty meal, because i spent my money on a drug deal, and i aint down to steal! so i might shoot a quail, and when i get out of jail i am gona sail!

just a little rap i thought up what you guys think any good?

kodiakalaska said:

yo i just started a new thread, this shit may be read, well i say it in my head, i dont wana be dead, and i am sitting in bed, whats up fred? i just fled from the cops because they found my crops, and im about to pops the pills so i start to feel, the empty meal, because i spent my money on a drug deal, and i aint down to steal! so i might shoot a quail, and when i get out of jail i am gona sail!

just a little rap i thought up what you guys think any good?

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i like the delivery but still kinda weak.

Id give you a record deal

I just got home from work
im a jerk
cuz id rather be smokin this weed than playin with this squirt
Im talkin about my son that is
hes the cutest little kid
hes got a spiderman suit on
and karate chops my arm

i think ill put thie jibber down
and get him some lucky charms

Twisted fantasies of death
prayin somebody takes my breath
leaves me fallin to the earth, where my body shall be left
zip tied and fried
or simple shotz from behind
Wait!
I dont wanna die
Throw this shit in rewind

im just sittin here chillin sippin penicillin wishin i could make a killin
i know that i will one day, til then imma sit here and pray
wait hold the fuck up, there ain't anyone there, i tried that a while ago but i guess he couldn't hear...

kodiakalaska said:

yo i just started a new thread, this shit may be read, well i say it in my head, i dont wana be dead, and i am sitting in bed, whats up fred? i just fled from the cops because they found my crops, and im about to pops the pills so i start to feel, the empty meal, because i spent my money on a drug deal, and i aint down to steal! so i might shoot a quail, and when i get out of jail i am gona sail!

just a little rap i thought up what you guys think any good?

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lol a rap thred i dont mc but i like clashin so...

shup your fukin trap you carnt rap
rap in my bitz youl end up with a slap
you ent reppin your hoods the joak of the map
you ent gangster your straight up crap
you just got merced in 3 barz its a wrap
big up east LDN brap brap brap

yh i just sent for you bitch (lol joaks of corse)
we should make a roll it up clash thred for all us e-thugs lol

(i no im lame but feel fee to clash me its a larth)

BongTokinAlcoholic420 said:

im just sittin here chillin sippin penicillin wishin i could make a killin
i know that i will one day, til then imma sit here and pray
wait hold the fuck up, there ain't anyone there, i tried that a while ago but i guess he couldn't hear...

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please ive had enoth of fake G's chattin about P's
il take your goods after i pull out the shank and say freeze
i ent got a option i didnt get no GCSE's
so ive gotta be on road shottin green trees
while you man are at home sippin cups of teas

haha send back lmao

I've been scroggin the dank back when your mom was a skank at truckstops of america sucking for crank.

mookie brown said:

I've been scroggin the dank back when your mom was a skank at truckstops of america sucking for crank.

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i took the day off on friday
told the kids to go play
smoked some weed that i needed
then im on opium for the whole day

im makin money on the regular
screenin calls up on my cellular
i like to keep it quiet when i drive it
so they hear it when im f'in her

Im feelin great, yea its kickin in
what a world we be livin in
its like a game you can never win
but im still trying like a veteran

westhamm1132 said:

please ive had enoth of fake G's chattin about P's
il take your goods after i pull out the shank and say freeze
i ent got a option i didnt get no GCSE's
so ive gotta be on road shottin green trees
while you man are at home sippin cups of teas

haha send back lmao

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HA you wanna come at me bitch please
i been flippin keys before u even learnt yo fuckin abc's
ay yo quit frontin kid we all know wut u about
talkin alotta shit cuz u like to scream n shout
but u musta forgot somethin
this ain't no mother fuckin game
fill u wit lead til blood drips from yo brain
and that'll be the end of it
no more fakes and no more snitchs..
they'll find ur body in the river needin major stitches

I like my red meat and beer cuz I'm not a fucken queer...a boom boom check check a boom check. My bitches face needs some ice cuz I had to tell her twice...a boom boom check check a boom check. lol I love my wife!

Big P said:

i took the day off on friday
told the kids to go play
smoked some weed that i needed
then im on opium for the whole day

im makin money on the regular
screenin calls up on my cellular
i like to keep it quiet when i drive it
so they hear it when im f'in her

Im feelin great, yea its kickin in
what a world we be livin in
its like a game you can never win
but im still trying like i veteran

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big p mabe you should go play with the kids
spittin is a big boys game
ive got barz that will put you to shame
your no challinge just a tempory pain
you can try you will still get slain
i run the endz 2010's my rain
i run shit im not timid or tame
dont fuk wid me the bat will leave irraversable dameige to your brain.

how can u spit when your barz dont ryme
your a posh boy never been exposed to no crime
im street wise thats how ive avoided doin prison time
beefs not long to me its all good its fine
watch your back im alwase watchin myne.

haha its all joaks try readin it in a rappin style it will sound better.

any one else?????

BongTokinAlcoholic420 said:

HA you wanna come at me bitch please
i been flippin keys before u even learnt yo fuckin abc's
ay yo quit frontin kid we all know wut u about
talkin alotta shit cuz u like to scream n shout
but u musta forgot somethin
this ain't no mother fuckin game
fill u wit lead til blood drips from yo brain
and that'll be the end of it
no more fakes and no more snitchs..
they'll find ur body in the river needin major stitches

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ok the standerds are getten higher nice...

alcohlic put the fukin beer down
your imagein shit i can see your a clown
stop chattin about movein waigh you ent down
you will get jacked as soon as you enter my town
what you smokein in that bong it must be brown

whats this chat about my body by a river
i can tell your a snake in the grass is where you slither
dont try makein threts you carnt deliver
i ent scered of you ive got more fear for winne the poo and tigger
dont make me draw for the air gun and pull the trigger.

estesj said:

I like my red meat and beer cuz I'm not a fucken queer...a boom boom check check a boom check. My bitches face needs some ice cuz I had to tell her twice...a boom boom check check a boom check. lol I love my wife!

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whats this chat about your not a gay
i can tell your bent thats as clear as day
i bet you even look gay when you spray
youll get done quick time with no delay
give up spittin your not the next 2pac or dre


haha

westhamm1132 said:

ok the standerds are getten higher nice...

alcohlic put the fukin beer down
your imagein shit i can see your a clown
stop chattin about movein waigh you ent down
you will get jacked as soon as you enter my town
what you smokein in that bong it must be brown

whats this chat about my body by a river
i can tell your a snake in the grass is where you slither
dont try makein threts you carnt deliver
i ent scered of you ive got more fear for winne the poo and tigger
dont make me draw for the air gun and pull the trigger.

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wuts up wit all those little kid rymes
u talkin air guns and bb's i'm talkin ak's n nine's
fuck around n get yo head busted open
this ain't a joke, i bet that's wut u hopin
i don't think you know who the fuck u dealin wit
the shit u smokin on yo let me get a hit
cuz u thinkin u a badass dude listen here
i'll smash yo head open wit a tire iron.. cuz u's a queer

westhamm1132 said:

whats this chat about your not a gay
i can tell your bent thats as clear as day
i bet you even look gay when you spray
youll get done quick time with no delay
give up spittin your not the next 2pac or dre


haha

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gay you say I am.. well I tapped your moms bearded clam. I cant say it was the best but expect a baby est. I wouldent make me mad cuz I'm your new fucken dad!

places i be visitin always gettin fire
they all go back to practice weed once I leave & screech my tires
they try to test the number one but they aint got no cyphers
you cant even get to me with these weak ass rapper liers

BongTokinAlcoholic420 said:

wuts up wit all those little kid rymes
u talkin air guns and bb's i'm talkin ak's n nine's
fuck around n get yo head busted open
this ain't a joke, i bet that's wut u hopin
i don't think you know who the fuck u dealin wit
the shit u smokin on yo let me get a hit
cuz u thinkin u a badass dude listen here
i'll smash yo head open wit a tire iron.. cuz u's a queer

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look were wrightin bars not poetry 1 bar at a time is wack
its not beer or weed your on i suspect crack
your nothin the amout of man ive boyed i carnt keep track
i was on road makein ps while u was givein head for smack

i know your talkin aks and nines but talkins all yor doin
your a fake mc il run up your yard and leave your crib in ruin
im not a guy you wanna try slewin
your rotten body is what the pigs will be chewin
this guys fake i can c right throw i'm