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NevaSmokedOut

NevaSmokedOut

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this was my first freestyle i ever wrote back in the day

yo it's rage i got man i really can't take
it this rage agression i really can't
shake it, ever since i was 5 it made
feel like a murderer this demon inside
is trying to take down under, but
i'm a nice dude i don't like to get
serious but don't fuck with me or
i'm bound to get furious, i feel like
a dog ready to bite ya in the ass,
i feel like the hulk cause yo i'm ready
to smash, this ain't difficult my fist
an knee will cripple you you so pit-
iful cause my rhymes is so critical,
i'm a savage, i ravage when i go
i leave damage, you ain't nothing
to me man i eat like a turkey sand-
wich
 
JoNny Pot sMokeR

JoNny Pot sMokeR

Active Member
NevaSmokedOut said:
this was my first freestyle i ever wrote back in the day

yo it's rage i got man i really can't take
it this rage agression i really can't
shake it, ever since i was 5 it made
feel like a murderer this demon inside
is trying to take down under, but
i'm a nice dude i don't like to get
serious but don't fuck with me or
i'm bound to get furious, i feel like
a dog ready to bite ya in the ass,
i feel like the hulk cause yo i'm ready
to smash, this ain't difficult my fist
an knee will cripple you you so pit-
iful cause my rhymes is so critical,
i'm a savage, i ravage when i go
i leave damage, you ain't nothing
to me man i eat like a turkey sand-
wich[/QUO

If you wrote it down, and it didnt come about
of the top of the dome, you didnt say it aloud,
then its a written and that wack ass shit will get bitten
and torn off. dont be scared even ya mama knows what its like to be whoren off.
so i guess it runs in the family. jizz in ya eye and now you cant see.
its battle rappin kid so dont get mad. just relax and sit.
no need for a mic or a beat. ill do this shit solo on the street in my sleep.
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NevaSmokedOut

NevaSmokedOut

Well-Known Member
JoNny Pot sMokeR said:
NevaSmokedOut said:
this was my first freestyle i ever wrote back in the day

yo it's rage i got man i really can't take
it this rage agression i really can't
shake it, ever since i was 5 it made
feel like a murderer this demon inside
is trying to take down under, but
i'm a nice dude i don't like to get
serious but don't fuck with me or
i'm bound to get furious, i feel like
a dog ready to bite ya in the ass,
i feel like the hulk cause yo i'm ready
to smash, this ain't difficult my fist
an knee will cripple you you so pit-
iful cause my rhymes is so critical,
i'm a savage, i ravage when i go
i leave damage, you ain't nothing
to me man i eat like a turkey sand-
wich[/QUO

If you wrote it down, and it didnt come about
of the top of the dome, you didnt say it aloud,
then its a written and that wack ass shit will get bitten
and torn off. dont be scared even ya mama knows what its like to be whoren off.
so i guess it runs in the family. jizz in ya eye and now you cant see.
its battle rappin kid so dont get mad. just relax and sit.
no need for a mic or a beat. ill do this shit solo on the street in my sleep.
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interesting...

you comin at kid from the inner city
who used to act kiddy now shitty
livin in my mom's caddy rapping ever
so gladly, i been rhymin since i 6
years old before i started spittin
at whack emcees i saw the chains
an gold, came to an age an learned
that money will sale ya soul, you
betta watch whatcha say or you'll
lean like you old so pressure neva
makes me fold, i was told to stand
on my 2 feet neva let man punk
like im weak the trials of life
begin on the street know im
the last thing you'll ever see

an i just wrote that off the top of my head.
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JoNny Pot sMokeR

JoNny Pot sMokeR

Active Member
Thats word like to ya motha son.

What could i say, back in the day i used to slit necks
Now im old school and super advanced, cutin whole limbs off with the first glance
of my razor blade tounge, i slice and dice emcees on the mic, no im not nice.
So sit down at ya desk and finish ya test, have no regrets and put on ya vest.
cause im about to spray the AK your way,
until it goes click. no sir i didnt miss.
yo i may be white but ill spit off and recite
some dope shit thats ill. some rhymes shat will scar and kill
ill put you on the bar and grill you. till your well done.
did ya mama tell you yet that your my son.

Nice rappin with ya dawg been a while since ive been on the mic. we used to battle rap every weekend where im from in this old bar called The New Brooklan Tavern. Seen some super dope shit go down in there.
 
NevaSmokedOut

NevaSmokedOut

Well-Known Member
JoNny Pot sMokeR said:
Thats word like to ya motha son.

What could i say, back in the day i used to slit necks
Now im old school and super advanced, cutin whole limbs off with the first glance
of my razor blade tounge, i slice and dice emcees on the mic, no im not nice.
So sit down at ya desk and finish ya test, have no regrets and put on ya vest.
cause im about to spray the AK your way,
until it goes click. no sir i didnt miss.
yo i may be white but ill spit off and recite
some dope shit thats ill. some rhymes shat will scar and kill
ill put you on the bar and grill you. till your well done.
did ya mama tell you yet that your my son.

Nice rappin with ya dawg been a while since ive been on the mic. we used to battle rap every weekend where im from in this old bar called The New Brooklan Tavern. Seen some super dope shit go down in there.
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great to know there's still some talented blood out there man.
 
JoNny Pot sMokeR

JoNny Pot sMokeR

Active Member
I still got tons of homies back home that are good as fuck and very popular on the local scene. I get to go home every few months ( im livin in Europe right now) so i get in on a sypher every now and then. Last time i was home my boy pulled me up on stage and handed me the mic. i kinda froze for a second but i couldnt puss out so i threw my shit down and had the whole party hoppin it was some pretty cool shit.
 
L

LA Trap

Member
and yea, trap so fresh
these haters on my head like fly's around death
thats why im burnin up like california wildfires
bitch, smoke up, cali got that wild fire
finish up, we on to the money
take a hundred out the stack and wipe your nose if its runny

somebody should add on to this one
 
immaking3

immaking3

Well-Known Member
tell me if i get the simon thumbs down lol.......
im to far on my life path to ever go back hope im on the right track but to the end imma stash cash running through life cuz i cant finish last probably y everything is moving way to fast talking bout my last born a !@#$%^&(last name) so im already in the lead time to slow down let my feet hit the ground lookin for a girl that love me but dont get around tell me now can u be found or am i sitting here silliy something like a clown if you the one ill never let you frown love u till the end of time ull nver my mind when we togeter how come time flies got me high like we busting lines rite me up a ticket cuz u already lookin fine and this is from the top of my mind and from the bottom of my heart theres a thousand things i love about but couldnt even figure where to start.........got more finish lata if yall wanna hear it
 
westhamm1132

westhamm1132

Active Member
haha sik asif this threds still goin
im back cus i still got sik bars flowin
im more cold than the wether when its snowin
some mans barz dont ryme they look like there spitin a poem
they think there big on road but i dont no him

haha send 4 me
 
Big P

Big P

Well-Known Member
I dont know him
but he knows me
A steady smokin OG
better than the Old E
single malt whisky

chickens call me filthy
not because of dirt jerk
its because im tippin $50's
im puttin'em to work first

makin sure they please me
i aint gon get too greedy
ill put it all on tv
let your momma even see me:D
 
westhamm1132

westhamm1132

Active Member
Big P said:
I dont know him
but he knows me
A steady smokin OG
better than the Old E
single malt whisky

chickens call me filthy
not because of dirt jerk
its because im tippin $50's
im puttin'em to work first

makin sure they please me
i aint gon get too greedy
ill put it all on tv
let your momma even see me:D
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big p hes a snitch
more of a dog thats a girl hes a bitch
dont wanna send for me n see me switch
dont want your body on the news after your found in a ditch

your own mum wont even see you when the bullets pass throw
i called you a bitch and you know its true
carn swing it with me get beaten black and blue
u ent big ive never herd of you big p? who the fuk are you

haha =)
 
Big P

Big P

Well-Known Member
lol


im me, the man with the stinky tree
smoke my weed, gots everything i need
i aint never been to Briton
And im not tryin to brawl
but I heard you couldnt fight
from those boys at MillWall:D


but im not trying to trip
to be honest i kinda like it
Green Street hooligans
from West Ham United













 
westhamm1132

westhamm1132

Active Member
Big P said:
lol


im me, the man with the stinky tree
smoke my weed, gots everything i need
i aint never been to Briton
And im not tryin to brawl
but I heard you couldnt fight
from those boys at MillWall:D


but im not trying to trip
to be honest i kinda like it
Green Street hooligans
from West Ham United













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haha that was good

but seriosly big p
you could never out clash me
il roll throw your endz on a killin spree
forget 2 bullets in your head il be leavein 3

look i can tell that your shook
clashin ent your style you shold read a book
dont wanna be on the other end of my right hook
dont wanna get your possesions took
your a bitch get back in the kitchen and cook
 
Big P

Big P

Well-Known Member
im back on the track
I dont know when that ill be back
got these nerds on my back
got me workin 40 for my stacks

my bank accounts wont fit
i be stackin more than chips
more like bags of frito lays
only be spending just the grits

so I can stack em up
and tell these nerds like what the fuck?
im leavin this cash hive
i plan to retire at 35 :D

and then what my do
im a butter up the crew
passin jobs up for the cogs
so they can bank too

we are chedder getter demons
you can call me Asmodeus
the king of all the goblins
if you see me grab your wallets
 
Steph187

Steph187

Active Member
John wooden,no bum like drew gooden,coachin was good like some chocolate pudden. Forreal the dude was legit,on inbound draw ups he was the shit, he was cool ,calm,collected and shit but a whole notha nigga when pullin dem tricks,best eva like drake said sprite was,the best ever like mike tysons fight was,he was calm but could heat like a light bulb,changed da the game like ultimate fight club,truly humbled,might have stumbled but never,ever falled,end of da day his team wasnt out-balled. R.I.P wooden..forgive my average rapping skills
 
victozap

victozap

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I'm a little mangled,
You neck looks a little strangled
Maybe it's my hands, maybe its the alcohol that angled
Its way, down my throat
I hope you choke, on the big cock of victo's longest spoke
On the wheel, hell my dicks a fully balanced meal
What's the schpbeal, am I mean as Shaquel?
Cause I'm about to slam it, just about to dunk it
After I get my hand, yall are gonna flunk it
Ya trying to bluff, and I know your stuff
So go back home to ya girl along with her muff!!!!!!

Damn its the Zap and hes back on attack
Rap was crap until I fine tuned the track
Ya spines blue and black
Is it a guess? Nope just a plain fact
I took ya spine, bent it out of line
Intertwined it with a vine and hung it from a pine
Tree is what me, is smoking on as of the m-o-m....e-n-T!
So now ya see, what the victo can a-c-c
-Omplish, i'm just a moving conquest
Making yall into a mother fucking barf fest
So come on my turf lest
You wanna get beat, on the beat, on the track
Matter of fact, I'm gonna stay away cause i'm allergic to wack!!!!!!!!11
 
BongTokinAlcoholic420

BongTokinAlcoholic420

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yo i been through some shit, popped out clean as a whistle taking daily acid hits. this aint a gimmick theres no fuckin way. gettin blasted for 2 straight keys of columbian yay. not today not ever, how i put this shit together in an oh so cleaver....way make you say yo this cat got skills. almost as original as the way he pays his bills.
 
Big P

Big P

Well-Known Member
no doubt niggas outlast like plastic
when shit gets drastic, they'll put you in a body bag and tag it
never ever lettem have shit, to hem you up
four thousand other averages gettin buck
and i never even had shit till i got crunk
now im livin mansions smokin skunk



and anyone one who got a problem, catchin lumps:bigjoint:
 
BongTokinAlcoholic420

BongTokinAlcoholic420

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yo yo check it i be on the internet kickin it wit my homies; we always stay lifted so bitch why don't you blow me; we got the dank buds and we never talk to fuzz; and when it comes harvest time shit you know we get the love; everybody in my crew gots a greenthumb; took a hit of your shit; n i almost went dumb; ; thats why we grow the bud; because of people like you; people like you who have no clue; into what the fuck i actually do.:leaf:
 
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