Looks good for your first grow but you might want to straighten out those wires and find another box to grow in..that's a fire waitin to happen. One thing goes wrong when no one is home and that cardboard will be up in flames. I don't think insurance covers house fires caused by grow operations haha. Also, grab a space blanket from walmart or something (make sure it is made with mylar; they tend to be around 3 bucks or less) and replace that alluminum foil..that just dissipates the light and here you need to take full advantage of what you have you know.
ya i took care of the wires awhile ago, never updated the pics. and thanks for the suggestions, i will invest in the space blanket as soon as i can. For the cardboard, that is temporary until i build a grow closet out of wood, which I am going to start this weekend.