Super Lemon Haze - Strain Of The Week

crashbog127

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ok, here is my feedbak. you need more light (you already know this), it's too much of the same thing, one long shot. you need to cut it up, maybe put some ambient sound in the background just to fill the space and give vibe. The light problem is HUGE. it would be nice if you were in a room that looked cleaner and more professional, maybe if you had a jar of the bud and cut to pix. the images at the end were not impressive enough, i want HD, i want to see the crystals. fill the screen, do some fades, maybe after effects, show different pixs moving past.

the real lowdown, i could barely sit through 2.5 minutes of it because there was nothing to look at. no one wants to see your talking head. Especially when the light sucks and you're in someones bedroom that looks like grandma died there. You're not bad looking but why would any pothead want to sit and look at some guys head for 2 and a half minutes?

just my opinion and you asked for it. hope it's not hurtful.


I FORGOT TO MENTION - you need to script what you're going to say. you can't just yap, be concise, don't repeat, state the facts. no uummm or like or lemonish.
as harsh and str8 to the point it was. Thank you.. i could work with that. i deffinetly plan on adding light with my next video and trying to get a green screen backdrop going aswell.
going to work on talking probly for 1 1/2 mins as for the actual bud i cant always get my hand on a new crazy strain every week, so i wont be able to do that with every video.
ill work on getting pics with better shots in the slideshow at the end.

As for music.. your not the only one who has said that.. but, if i play music, wouldnt it be hard to hear what im saying? lol
 

medicalmaryjane

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add something quiet that is mostly just for depth. You may want to come in and introduce with a little sound in the background and then let the music fade out and come back at the end during the images.

i know what you mean, the focus is on what you're saying so you need to keep any other sounds subtle. you have to play around.

if you want people to watch, it has to be well produced. editing is extremely important for keeping viewers interest, no one likes one long shot.

give it a name like "weed report" and make a logo and show that at the beginning. something poppy, a little intro.

the person who said putting you face with this is a bad idea may be right, imagine you go on a job interview and they saw you here?

too bad you're not in CA or soemwhere where you have access to tons of different strains...
 
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